Animation - Moon Going Around the Earth

this week i did and animation this animation is based on the moon going around the earth ,
i think i need to improved to take my time and not rush it and add more detail.i think i did well because i got it finished and I THINK it looks good tell me in the comments what you think i need to improved and what you think i could have add in his slides show and tell me what you think about it :)

space

Walt: we are learning about space and the solar system

this week we learnt about space this is based on Earth,Uranus, And my made up planet Rupert!
I think i need to improve on reading the questions and paying more attention to what the questions are. i think i did well because i added pitcher of what they look like. And really tried hard!! tell me in comments what you think I need to improve and what you think i could have done better :)

please give me good feed back and comments